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Lovely Feelings: Chapter 3

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Lovely Feelings
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"____, ____.. _____!" you heard someone call, you were being nudged, you opened your eyes slowly and looked at the person who woke you up. You then worried how long you'd been here and if you were any burden on Germany. You then came back into reality and realized that it was Prussia, sitting right next to you on the bed. Your eyes widened and you sat up "Um.. where's your brother?" you asked avoiding eye contact, Prussia stayed silent. You shifted uncomfortably and looked up at the ceiling "D-did you need something?" you asked, "Are you going to.. be serious.. with my bruder?" he asked. You blushed at the question and turned to him, he looked a bit disappointed. "W-well.. I'm-" he then stopped you "Why do you like Ludwig?" Prussia asked you and his crimson orbs locking onto your eyes. "W-well.." you started he came over a little closer, his face inches away from yours. You turned tomato red "It's just.. he's just.." It was tough talking about why you liked Germany, you were mostly thinking about why you liked Prussia, you shook your thoughts away about him and paid more attention about your feelings toward Germany. "He's a really sweet man.. and considerate.. I feel very protected when I'm around him, when he smiles it bring warmth to my heart.." you shyly said huddling your knees up to your chest looking at nothing in particular. Prussia backed away "I see.. d-did I ever make you feel that way?", "W-well.. it's a bit different.." your blushed started to fade. "So.. it's really over between us.." Prussia sighed, you then whispered "I guess so." and looked over at him with teary eyes. You were getting a bit emotional as you still had some of your heart captured by him, you felt somewhat of a pang in your heart "I-I'm sorry.." you apologized quietly. You felt a hand on your shoulder and looked over and started into those crimson orbs, they looked so dead, he then pulled you over to him and whispered "Don't forget I still love you." and left you with a kiss on your dry lips which were now moist. You blushed and touched your lips, why did he just do that? You were trying to stop liking him but now it was more difficult, it wasn't just the kiss.. it was being around him and remembering when you both were together and happy. Tears started to well up in your eyes you faced down, you whispered to yourself "Stop it. You need to be stronger and forget about him stupid!" you then heard the door open and you quickly looked up and it was of course Germany. You looked back down and scooted to the edge of the bed "Sorry for being a burden." you mustered out as tears ran down your cheeks and you hopped off his bed and made your way to the door when he stood. Germany then walked over to you and laid his hands on your shoulders and you refused to look him in the eyes, you felt as you were going to break down if you both made eye contact, he then took a hand off one of your shoulders and used it to raise your head and you kept your eyes closed as he did so. "Was it Gilbert?" he quietly asked, more tears poured down, "I saw him walk out of here, what did he do?" he asked in a gentle voice. You just shook your head and pulled away from him and continued your way to the door, he then grabbed your arm and pulled you over. You tried to break free from his grip but he was too strong and you were forced to stay there "L-let me go!" you shouted as your tears started to rapidly make their way down to your chin and drip off. "_____, please tell me what he did." he said in a now stern voice, "N-nothing!" you shouted. Germany then let go of you and you took off to the door and walked out barefoot running to your house. So much for a romantic dinner date.
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It was the next morning and you were still in his clothes, you left both pairs of footwear and your dress (And your panties and bra) there but you didn't want to go back there. Your mind then wondered to last night's events, Prussia kissing you and.. you being a complete.. jerk, you started to tear up and you let out sobs it's not like anyone could hear you since you lived alone. After a half hour you got up and washed your face and made your way to the kitchen, you picked up a nice apple and started to bite chunks off and eat them. You sighed and took off his clothes and put on your casual outfit, you grabbed the T-shirt and boxers and threw them in the wash machine. There was a knock at the door, you sighed it was probably Germany, and you walked up to it and unlocked the door. To your surprise it wasn't him it was Prussia, he held up your panties and smiled, you blushed and opened the door and pulled him inside.. you didn't want to whole neighborhood seeing. "Well here's the stuff you left at the house." he said dropping down the two pairs of shoes and the dress, "But I'm keeping these." he said holding up your underwear you jumped up and grabbed them and blushed profusley. You took your clothes and grabbed your shoes and put them on the floor and your clothes in your hamper, you then heard a squeak and looked over to see Prussia laying on your bed casually. "_____, you really need a new matress it squeaks all the time." he said, "Does it look like I have that kind of money?" your voice sounding annoyed. You then grabbed him and yanked him off your bed "You can leave now, I'll return Ludwig's clothes after they finish washing and drying.". "Aw, I can't wait here _____?" he asked and looked at you with puppy dog eyes, "Not going to work." you said turning away because they did work and you were blushing and you definetly didn't want him to see that! He got up and picked you up throwing you onto the bed, squeak, you bounced up as you landed on the matress he then jumped over to the bed landing right  next to you and smirked. "G-gilbert." you said looking down, he then scooted closer to you and wrapped his arms around you "Your very cold ____, let me warm you up." he seductively said. Your face was tomato red and you squirmed in his grip "Gilbert, stop it!" you said, "Why should I? You seem to like it according to your face." he said "Gilbert, you need to stop this.. were not together anymore. Don't you remember anything you and I said the other night?!" you shouted and pulled away from him and fled the room to check if his clothes were done washing. You couldn't stand this right now. They were done washing, according to you, and you threw them in the dryer. "Got you!" he said grabbing you from behind, he must've snuck up on you. You jumped and blushed at the touch, "Gilbert. Can you please stop touching me?" you said taking his hands off of you. "I can't help it, ____." he said pouting. You sighed "Look the clothes will be dry in a bit, but not fast enough. Please go home, I'll just drop them off, okay?" and you then walked over to your front door. Prussia just walked out of the laundry room and stayed there glaring at you "Stop glaring at me!" you shouted. You then ran over and grabbed his arm and started to pull him over to the door. He stopped abrubtly and you fell on top of him, he smirked and you blushed a deep red color, "You and your tricks.." you whispered to yourself. He wrapped his arms around you and you pushed your hands on his chest trying to get off of him, his hands trailed to your sides and he started tickling you. You started to laugh and fell on top of him, you had no strength when someone tickled you, "St-stop it!" you giggled. He hissed "No way!", "P-please! I'll do anything.. j-just stop ti-tickling me!" you managed to get out "Anything?" he asked. "Yes! Now please!" you said without thinking straight, all you wanted was for him to stop tickling you. You could hardly breathe anymore as he was tickling you, he then let go "Finally! Thank you." you said with a grin. "Now for my reward?" he winked at you, this couldn't be anything rash probably a kiss on the cheek or something 'awesome'. "A nice kiss right here." he said pointing to his lips, "Okay fine!" and you gave him a quick peck. He then gave a sad smile "W-what?" you asked getting off of him, "That wasn't long enough.." he huffed. He then got up after you and walked to the door "Beggers can't be choosers." you said opening it for him. He then stole a kiss from you and smirked and ran off, you were left blushing. Why is Prussia giving all these kisses? He sure needs to be taught a lesson. You then realized that you had kissed him, and you sort of liked it... Yeah, this definetly does not good at all. You then heard the dryer ring and you got out the freshly washed clothes and you inhaled the nice fresh smell, you then decided you'd leave for Germany's after making yourself some ice cold green tea.
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You walked up to Germany's door step, you heard yelling going on inside. You lightly knocked, but of course it wasn't heard because of the yelling. You then decided to tune it. "WHY DO YOU HAVE TO LIKE HER WEST?! SHE WAS MINE! IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT SHE ISN'T WITH ME ANYMORE." you could hear Prussia yelling at the top of his lungs, you stood there frozen. "Well maybe if you actually treated her right then she would like you!", that was definetly Germany's voice. You then had a flash back when you confronted Prussia about your feelings for both brothers.. he had slapped you. You put your hand on your cheek and started to weep, you fell to your knees at his door step. All the bad memories with Prussia had flowed into your head and you couldn't bear them. "Shut your mouth, west!" Prussia yelled back, "You always treat your girlfriends like crap!" the younger brother shouted. You then got up and started to bang on the door and kept yelling "STOP IT!" as tears flowed down your eyes, the brothers had stopped. The door then opened up to both of the brothers, you took Germany's clothes and threw them on the ground "_______." they both said. "_____.. I'm sorry you had to hear that." Germany apologized, Prussia didn't say anything and just looked away. You shook your head and then walked away, "Wait, ____!" you heard Germany call. "Just let her go, she's a waste of your time anyway." Prussia coldy said, and you then you really took off. After you pasted their street you then tripped and fell on the sidewalk, scraping your hands and legs. You were sure to get bruised and those scratches are going to burn when you clean them. You cried harder as you knew you were alone and no one was going to help you. You tried getting up but you couldn't, it's as if your legs had gone out. You then heard  a voice, "_____. Are you okay..?", you then turned around.
Tried leaving it on a cliffhanger.. fail.
Sorry if this is too.. PrussiaxReader..
Personally I didn't exactly like this chapter, I feel as though I didn't put as much emotion into it. Hopefully the next chapter I will. I wanted to put some bad language into this but I didn't, just cause.. it was really hard to do by the way..

Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 2: [link]
Chapter 3: You are here~
Chapter 4: [link]
Chapter 5: [link]
Chapter 6: [link]
Chapter 7 (END): [link]


[UPLOADED: 09/07/11]
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gilbert is a jerk..........